OUTLINE:
I. introduction
Throughout this paper I will describe an important person in my life at present.
II. Characteristics
1. Physical features
2. Behavior
III. Background
1. Values
IV. Describing our relationship
1. Why she is important to me
V. conclusion
1. Describing her with all my senses
Descriptive essay
A special girl in my life.
Previously, I had never known a person who left a great impression on me. Since I met this girl, whose name is Marcela, I am a different man. I am happier than I was in the past. In fact she makes me feel brand new. She possesses a set of characteristics which give me pleasure to describe. Throughout this paper I will describe an important woman in my life at present.
First of all, I will try to tell you what the main features that distinguish her among other women are. She is a nineteen year old girl whose beauty shines everywhere she sets foot. She has stunning brown eyes and long shiny, black hair. Her lips are like a tasteful apple waiting to be bitten. Her soft white skin makes me compare her with an angel. She is 5.30´tall but even though she could be described as a tiny girl she has a huge soul. She is a complete lady in the extended sense of the word. She consistently treats all those who surround her with respect; her behavior is very proper indeed.
Knowing her, I have found out what a beautiful person she is. She comes from a small town and maybe due to this she is a person of integrity. She is a very generous and supportive person; someone who would help you without hesitation at any given time. Her values are too important to her and that motivate me to stand for what I believe. She is the type of girl I always dreamt of.
Regarding our relationship, I will say that this is the best relationship that I have had. We understand each other; since I have known her everything has changed for me. We are both extremely close and enjoy each other’s company, share problems and solve them together. I feel a positive energy around us. She is very important to me. She gives me the support that I need so much. She understands me and even more importantly she loves me.
In summary, Marcela is a genuine woman whose individuality combines with her moral and physical beauty to make her incredibly important to me. She helps me to be a better man. Now that I have this commitment to her, my life has changed for the positive. If I were to describe her with all my senses, I would say she smells like a sweet rose perfume, she tastes like a juicy apple, she looks like an angel, her skin feels as soft as silk or velvet, in a word she is everything.
Sunday, 11 October 2009
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the main idea is a little bit confusing
the first sentence is the thesis statement? I'm not sure
the thesis does not contain the author's topic
the essay has an introduction
there is an outline
the writing is understandable
the essay is clear
it's divided into paragraphs
they beguin with a topic sentence
they have a transition sentence
there is a concluding paragraph
it restate the main points of the essay
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